Let’s clear the “smoke” and get on with the balancing “showing our unity in diversity” where are we?
It’s not a bad presentation, just needs a few areas clarifying and then a polish, my thoughts.
1-4) are fine
- Needs to be clear about web01 (the openweb) web2 (the #dotcons fight the openweb) and disaster non web3 we have today, on a positive note activertypub could be the openweb03 - I like to use the metaphor open/closed as its simple we have the openweb and the closed web.
OK we likely have other options on this lets here them.
6-12) are fine
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OK could be clearer.
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is the same as 13?
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"Represent European values in the way you engage
The medium is the message" not clear
Needs a stronger ending